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[HTBSR ep 4]

I'm now hooked

Seriously it's gets funnier and more intriguing. Even though it's the 4th episode.

However, I think it's exaggerated. Romans (south & north) in ancient times didn't really called malls, malls. They called them street markets. And they didn't know what a balloon was. Rubber wasn't discovered until the 1770's. But, it was funny calling helium "voice altering special air. " Because helium wasn't discover until 1865. Roman Empire was around 25 BC to AD 14 53.

I hope to see more and probably extend the movie a bit. And still tell a good story.

[Raccoon&HG - Raccoon]

Really?

Is that really how he became Raccoon. Because a wild raccoon just jumped on him? Was there something about that raccoon that we should know? Did it had special powers? Strange mutation? Or awkwardly uncoincidental mother nature Darwinism? Even though it's credits it's still a bit vague. And you made a little improvement on the animating.

TGCRed responds:

Well it had radio active rabies actually! thanks for the comment! ^-^

[asdfmovie: Newblood]

Original

All the jokes were funny and original. Not good as an official but better as a fan tribute. Marvelous work.

[Three Little Pigs Anime]

Nicely done

This is well composed. The art is outstanding,the voices and are clear, and the characters resemble the three little pigs and the wolf. It's all well put together and well animated. I'm giving you an 9 because it's an adapt from the story. Yet recreated and brought to life. Keep up the voice acting. You're talented. Think about collaborating.

[Tea Vs Coffee]

I would love a cup of tea

I luv T. Tea is the best drink that is less bitter than coffee. Coffee is the power and adrenaline than tea would ever be. Wonderful animation dude.

[OCT1 -Training and Travel]

Adorable

Original characters but uses anime references. Ha. However the animation seems to be lagging from the audio. You could probably fix this if you switch the audio sync to 'stream' depending on what version of flash you have (8 or higher). The art is great, the animating is not much but little and the story is interesting. On the other hand, that girl character doesn't talk but shows facial expressions of what she's responding to. I think it'll be best to keep her silent and continue with the facial expressions. You probably should add some physical acting to. They don't call it acting for nothing. I would love to see more and to be honest, you got me hooked and would like to see what happens next. Great job on the work and good luck in the tourney.

AnDrew19787 responds:

I've had a lot of issues with audio but it seems fine on my computer. If I set it to stream the quality would sound terrible for me. I found though that if you scroll the page up or down while the animation is playing the audio will tend to go off-sync. Sometimes it syncs a little differently each time you play it too (like getting punched in the face in time to the beat or not).

And yes, I'm adding more physical acting to my next animation already. Thank you for the review!

[Chefmaster]

I didn't get it

Hey dude, I love the joke but it's kinda missed up. There's no storyline and the plot was confusing. Wouldn't it be more fun if there were monsters of food? Or, if he had super cooking powers and not a finger gun? I was hoping for something that could fit the characters background. I mean, he's a chef.

[Subway Edition (Trailer)]

Needs improvement

So, this is what is going to show up in your movie? It's really confusing. As if something just rushed through your head. I would call this a preview trailer or a teaser. But as an opening? No. Sorry. I know you worked so hard on this and it's a very nice piece. But do the proper thing for it's proper section. I know you can do it. You are very talented. Maybe it would be better explaining the situation of the story, then we might get the idea. Just get that noggin to work and imagine what comes to mind. Just nothing like this. Overall, nice animation piece. marvelous art, and good work composing.

[I Have Bird]

I want a pigeon

I wonder what Abo will do if he encountered the tutak. I want to see more jokes from the Armenian bloke.

[Organized Stupidity]

Here's a challenge

Pronounce my name.

ganon95 responds:

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