shrizumalonito's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Soviet Nyan Cat]

Piroshki?

When I saw Soviet in the title I thought the body would be like a Piroshki or any other Russian food. Piroshki came to mind because I eat them. Oh well, the Soviet flag can be edible.

Yzahkin responds:

Good point. I love Piroshki, awesome food. But I wanted it incredibly communist so here we are :P

[Bill and the Cookie Jar]

At last

An actual short that you made aside from Hat Girl and Raccoon. Since it's an animated version of your old comics, it very well composed and the punch lines are fluent and objective. Try it again and this time, come up with something new.

TGCRed responds:

Haha yeah XD' Raccoon and Hatgirl are almost over actually, so after I put up the last one all my new stuff will be new stuff XD' Thanks for watching my stuff! : D

[Warriors of the Portal]

Clever

Epic animation. I don't know if this is the First successful 3D animation on Newgrounds, but it's the best one. Marvelous job on the characters design and animating the movement. The lighting is a bit dark. it was hard to define the characters. Outstanding plot of the best of Newgrounds in a battle royale. You did exclude some character and there might be are some reasons why. The medals are clever and the easter eggs as well. A few that I found are quite... exquisite. Stupendous job as always Osuka.

Osuka responds:

Thanks. I only included my favorite characters on the animation, for example im more fan of Time Fcuk than MeatBoy (and Meatboy is the popular one). I only wanted to have fun making this animation :)

[Dormitory Dudes]

Defintely Gay

Dude, I love the animation. The animating is fluent and the voice acting is incredible. What's really marvelous is where this story was going. First it's all offensive. And, then it get soft and forgiving. Obviously, you made a movie. Great job.

CatFat responds:

Very flattering thank you!

[Clayos - ZOMGIES]

Incredible

The animation is incredible. And the short skit is hilarious. The audio is crystal clear. It was well put together and it's remarkably composed. This is like the best zombie comedy I've ever seen. It could be the animation. Or it could be the voice acting. *Thumbs up

Kreid responds:

Jeez, best zombie comedy you've seen? That's something then haha :D

[Asteraceae Part 2 of 4]

Incredible

The animation is incredible but when it came to the point of the orange beard man. The proportion of the characters are off. Isn't that kid suppose to be smaller? He's like almost as tall as the person right next to him. However, I think I get the storyline. That kid wants to climb the mountain. Great art. Good animation. Need improvement on the character design. Mainly the size. That one part keeps bugging me. And I hope to see what happens next.

Dreamserum responds:

Wel my friend. The proportion is off, but i suggest you re-watch the part two there is a reason for it. *hint* fountain.

Ill post the other two parts tomorrow and only after you have seen everything will you understand why the proportion is off. =D thanks for taking the time to review!

[Raccoon&HG - Raccoon]

Really?

Is that really how he became Raccoon. Because a wild raccoon just jumped on him? Was there something about that raccoon that we should know? Did it had special powers? Strange mutation? Or awkwardly uncoincidental mother nature Darwinism? Even though it's credits it's still a bit vague. And you made a little improvement on the animating.

TGCRed responds:

Well it had radio active rabies actually! thanks for the comment! ^-^

[OCT1 -Training and Travel]

Adorable

Original characters but uses anime references. Ha. However the animation seems to be lagging from the audio. You could probably fix this if you switch the audio sync to 'stream' depending on what version of flash you have (8 or higher). The art is great, the animating is not much but little and the story is interesting. On the other hand, that girl character doesn't talk but shows facial expressions of what she's responding to. I think it'll be best to keep her silent and continue with the facial expressions. You probably should add some physical acting to. They don't call it acting for nothing. I would love to see more and to be honest, you got me hooked and would like to see what happens next. Great job on the work and good luck in the tourney.

AnDrew19787 responds:

I've had a lot of issues with audio but it seems fine on my computer. If I set it to stream the quality would sound terrible for me. I found though that if you scroll the page up or down while the animation is playing the audio will tend to go off-sync. Sometimes it syncs a little differently each time you play it too (like getting punched in the face in time to the beat or not).

And yes, I'm adding more physical acting to my next animation already. Thank you for the review!

[Organized Stupidity]

Here's a challenge

Pronounce my name.

ganon95 responds:

shrizumalonito

[Right Where You Do It]

that's how they do it

It's funny because it's what you expect from a child. The voice sounded like he was reading from a paper. WHich made it even more funny.

Aqlex responds:

It is funny for that reason. I think only the middle line sounds a little monotone though, the first and last line from him sound pretty natural to me. Thanks for the review!